Dayl's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[old people and buildings]

Death Insurance?

Damn, I gotta get me summa that :D

short n sweet, like my cock and my lovemaking.

keep em coming dude :)

Jayku responds:

you got it man

[Great Weed Drought of '03]

Awesome

i love your sense of humor, this is reminiscent of fear and loathing in las vegas, but totally its own thing. very nice.

"87 what...87...walruses!?"

i enjoyed every second of it.

[Culture Clubbing]

WOW. fucking AMAZING!

flawless victory there, dude.

funny, cool, exceptional animation, especially that FBF in the intro anim--- fucking incredible!!!
pretty random humor, very profesional feel. i can't even think of enough ways to say it. 10/10, 5/5

EPIC WIN, YOU ROCK!!!

[GunDan Ep. 1]

awesome work man!

i can tell you worked really hard on this n put all your effort in.
the 3d effects were pretty good, and the way you put it all together was excellent, although it could have been sliiiightly faster paced, just so theres less pauses in between dialogue and it keeps peoples attention better. maybe some ambient background music every now and then too.

i actually really want to see episode 2 and see how you improve!

cheers
Dayl

Aqlex responds:

Yeeees, faster pacing is something this thing needs hardcore. And music or just improved sound work in general would really help out.

Sadly, episode 2 never happened...

Thanks for the critique, dude!

[A Picture Speaks 1k Words]

brilliant

and decently executed for the time it took you :)

[JJZK - Elmo! Nooo!]

lulz

special thanks to elmo :P
i know you have intimate relations with him jayku. do you miss your sex doll?

lulz but really, it was funny.

Jayku responds:

... it haunts me at night, god that doll was GOOD.

but really, thanks man you're the awesome

[Zombie crasher's episode1]

not too shabbeh

it as decent. I can tell because i didn't want to vomit on my monitor while watching it, like most of the crap that i've been judging lately. i would like to hear it with some quitky voice acting, it was kinda funny seeing where it went. liked the randomness of the index finger bit and paying rent :P

i think you should make it longer, with voiceovers if possible, and if you want a preloader, go to the top of the page, find the "downloads" link, and click on flash preloaders. you'll have your very own ng tank logo, or even a madness day preloader in no time!

i liked the music too. good choice. keep it up, and always try to add more than you had last time, you'll improve with practice. good luck!

Hankman360 responds:

Thanks and i will. I have the preloader but i can' figure out what to do with it. I use layers, i go up to the top layer and paste the frame yet an error always occurs. also, when i try voice acting, the words always sound at the wrong time and i don't know how to edit them. I've got an idea though, i'll try it.

[The Line Ultimatum 2]

not terrible, i guess...

...but definitely not as good as your first one.
i thought i remembered your first one so i went and watched it and it`s a lot better than this one. LONGER, for one thing.

i liked some parts, like the first fast spiraling, when the music swelled. and the climbing black square-ish things on the right. you have talent, for sure...you just need to practice frame by frame more, and spend more time on your next one, so it`s longer.

Ajgajg responds:

Thanks for the great advice, the first one was longer, next time I'll make sure it's longer. Hopefully you like my next one more! Thanks for the comment!

[Twee diddled]

Wow, I loved it!

perfect short. it was hilarious. i think most people have their little bathroom paranoias. most are unfounded however :P

absolutely GREAT facial expressions!