Dayl's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[A Snowman's Tale]

awesome work for your first flash!

wow if thats the first flash you've ever done i cant wait to see more from you! i liked how you did the stick guy - instead of the usual plain stick-y-ness, you gave him a more human-ish shape. sorry about the low sound score, my speakers arent working, but by the look of the other ppl who reviewed it was pretty good.
make lots more!

Tolomus responds:

Thank you very much! I'll be sure to make some more in the future... watch this space! lol

[MAN 2: Naruto]

i guess i liked it

it was good at best. it wuz pretty funny and i liked the graphics but u must not watch naruto much because the shurikens are a darker gray than that and the symbol on ht e headbands was wrong. that little triangle is on the other side of the swirl and theres a point at the top, right hand side of the swirl. lol dont worry though, im a naruto fanatic.

Kyora-Mishiso responds:

There's no shirukens in this movie.
There are daggers. But no Shurikens.
And lastly, the images on the headband, I know, are not perfect, but hey, like you said, you're a fanatic. Of course you're going to notice that kinda stuff :P
Maybe I'll get on it...

[Colourless Chapter 1]

good work

but you need to improve your animating skills. the story was hard to follow at first but after a while it became clearer; good job on this flash!
4/5

Kironthen00binator responds:

Yeah, I can do alot better, but after the critical review of my last episodes of "colourless" i decided to redo them, This is a school assiment and I started not any less than a hour ago remaking Colourless, now it is 1:55 AM and i'm quite proud of myself that I finished 1 episode in a hour at this time in the morning. I will fix up some of the animation later though.

[Soul Warrior 1]

for the most part i liked it.

i haven't seen this good of a stick piece for a while.
the saiyan style fighting was good and it was done in the perfect speed.
but, i mean theres only so much you can do with a stick.
and you made the most of it.

N2tZ responds:

yay

[Beryllium]

okay, but i've seen better

first of all i'd like to congratulate you on the name.
good use of a rhyme.(has there been a helium yet? i wonder...)

the flash itself was O.K. but it wasn't long enough, and it was kinda dry. i like how you've responded to all the reviews-true wit-you should do that for a living! =P

this isn't the best parody of lillium i've seen, but its fine i guess, you should have made the dialogue rhme better and maybe follow a storyline closer to that of lillium.

good overall though! =D

sagan tucker age 13

ZekeySpaceyLizard responds:

HELIUM! Yes.
...I'll let you make that one.
I wont steal it.



today.

[C.O.S. Part 1]

nice job

this is pretty good for your first flash, i like it in fact.
some of the action went a bit too fast while other parts were stationary at awkward moments , make number 2 flow a bit better by pausing it less often but for longer when you do, and making the action seeable.
good luck

Project-Tom23 responds:

Ok thanks for your suggestion :)