not too shabbeh
it as decent. I can tell because i didn't want to vomit on my monitor while watching it, like most of the crap that i've been judging lately. i would like to hear it with some quitky voice acting, it was kinda funny seeing where it went. liked the randomness of the index finger bit and paying rent :P
i think you should make it longer, with voiceovers if possible, and if you want a preloader, go to the top of the page, find the "downloads" link, and click on flash preloaders. you'll have your very own ng tank logo, or even a madness day preloader in no time!
i liked the music too. good choice. keep it up, and always try to add more than you had last time, you'll improve with practice. good luck!